Julia Mato: poison

The overall emotion of the picture was sweetly displayed, you're on mark when it comes to tears and emotions displayed.

Things to consider working on are body postures and anatomy. The girl's shoulders are awkwardly angled to her bosom which is the same to her waist. The leg he's holding looks shorter than her other leg as well.

And of course a lot have trouble with them, but not detailing hands or feet doesn't help towards mastering them.

The shading ranges from very light and soft to very solid. Keeping it consistent would make it look nicer. Solids stand out.